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Ojoou-Forever(永遠 English Cover) 2 replies to this topic Started by Monkeypretzels , Feb 25 2009 06:18 PM · 

#1 Monkeypretzels

  • モーニング娘。

Posted 25 February 2009 - 06:18 PM

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Lyrics © hoodie09
[Verse 1]
I could tell I was the one for you
And I could tell you were the one for me
Whenever troubles would be coming our way
You'd fight them all and make them go away

[Verse 2]
I always felt like I was safe by you
I always felt I was in love with you
You always smiled for me when I was sad
I'll always miss the memories that we had

I believe that there were some times
I would feel alone by your side
But I wouldn't wish to leave your arms again

[Chorus 1]
What I wouldn't do that have you by my side
What I wouldn't do to have you in my life
Was I a fool to think you'd love me?
Or never ever leave me?

Could it be that there was someone else you loved?
Don't you know you're all I'm ever thinking of?
Is there nothing that I can do
To make it up to you?

Please don't say bye bye bye
Why did you say bye bye?
Why did you say bye bye?

[Verse 3]
Whenever we talked on the phone all night
We could talk until it hit sunrise
There wasn't anything we couldn't share
You promised me that you would always be there

[Verse 4]
When I was with you I could touch the sky
When I was with you I had wings to fly
But there's no way to fly with just one wing
I looked it up and there is no such thing

Repeat [Prechorus]

[Chorus 2]
You are all I need to make a change in my life
What do I gotta do to have you by my side?
There is nothing else better
Than when we are together
Please don't walk away

I know that there must be someone else on your mind
Please oh please don't leave my broken heart behind
There are always ways to make up
We don't have to break up
Just give me a chance

Please don't say bye bye bye
Why did you say bye bye?
Why did you say bye bye?

Is there something I can do to believe that you will come back?
Is there something I can say? Will you stay? Or will you leave again?
I know that nothing's changed, they will never ever change
I know that I'm to blame, but I'll always stay the same
I know that I can change, give me one more chance
Please come back to me

Repeat [Chorus 1]
Repeat [Chorus 2]

#2 Prinny Squad

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Posted 26 February 2009 - 02:59 AM

Your voice is nice! It's very soulful. With a little more power, you could go far with it. The prechorus and end of the bridge though... I'm sure it was just a mixing error, but it just didn't come together right. I can see the effect you're going for, but in the end it just sounded off. That's my only major complaint, though. Keep up the work, and I'm sure you'll be able to mix those parts successfully in the future.

GRADE: 8/10

#3 Monkeypretzels

  • モーニング娘。

Posted 26 February 2009 - 06:25 PM

Yeah, I tried mixing myself. And the pre-chorus turned out a little harsh. Thank You for the comment and critic.