Posted 10 January 2010 - 06:24 PM
I know I sound a bit monotone. I tried to sound alive.
Posted 19 February 2010 - 05:00 AM
a few things.
1. instrumentals, why do they add male voices singing the lines? it's annoying.
2. you almost got to the happy at about 1:30 and then, it just didn't happen. it was so close.
3. Also do you breath between "wa" & "chikai"? it just makes a weird effect.
Overall, even with monotone, 'tis good!
Edited by ArisaElizabethGold, 19 February 2010 - 05:01 AM.